Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Children over the age of 15 should be allowed to vote.
Every country chooses their president by voting. It is important to vote for the correct person because country’s success depends on the president. Teen age is very sensitive duration, it is difficult to judge them since they are undergoing lot of changes physically as well as emotionally. Teenager above 15 should vote or not is very hard to decide but, according to me they should not vote. Reasons for that I will explain in my ensuing essay.
First, at teen age hormonal imbalance is very high that is directly related to the thought process and decisions. Maturity is utmost important to take any responsible decision. In teenagers, maturity levels are not certain. Their perception of reality is really different and that makes them vulnerable. Also, their surrounding is also comprised of teenagers like them and thinking about the country is certainly the last thing they care. There is a very small ration of the teenagers out there that is mature then their age. And this is why they are not at the caliber where they can vote and decide the country’s future.
Secondly, Teenagers are also very easy to target for the candidates of the election. Bribing them with the little amount of money or as per their requirements is easy to do. On the other end, some might follow their parent’s opinion. Teenagers are not very much concerned about the career and jobs at this point of time and because of that they really do not care that which leader is going to come to rule the government. Most of their requirements are fulfilled by their parents. Because of their careless age there are chances that they vote for the random candidate under false recommendations. In conclusion, till now any country in the world not allowing teenager at age of 15 for vote and there might be plenty of good reasons behind it, some of them like immaturity, lack of knowledge, and blindly following others. As long as they are not affected directly by the government or ruler of the government they are carefree not to vote.
In conclusion, till now any country in the world have not allowed teenagers of 15 years to vote and there might be plenty of good reasons behind it, some of them like immaturity, lack of knowledge, and blindly following others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Teenage
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Suggestion: teenage
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1875.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 388.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8324742268 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69175213312 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469072164948 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.4119461664 48.9658058833 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2857142857 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4761904762 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163758577493 0.236089414692 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0460382739172 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556544401417 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114139772589 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437059265164 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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