Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children(five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that countries have evaluated various methods to discover a successful formula in various sectors such as education, industries and etc. In this regard, on the most important sectors is education which some people claims that the government should spend money on the education of very young children, while the proponents reckon that universities are more important than children education. It seems that spending money on university is far important for a couple of reasons describe in the following.
To begin with, if government take into consideration universities and spend money on the infrastructures of them such as laboratory and necessary facilities, the scientists and researchers can conduct new researches and produce new science. This new science can be exported to other countries and brings a millions of dollar for host country. This couple with the using new methods in industries thanks to new researches, all contributes to the development of a country.
Furthermore, talented people around the world can be absorbed into wealthy universities. In fact, talented people have new ideas in different sectors by which financial support can create new inventions. A telling example is U.S.A which a dozen of researches and science from different part of the world are living in this counties and provides U.S.A with new technology in various sectors. As a result, not only U.S.A can export to other countries and achieve profit, but also can improve their industries to become more productive.
Admittedly, it is true that spending money on children education bring various benefits for children such as personality growth and talent discovery. Nevertheless, university play an important role in the development of a countries, Therefore, investing on them can bring benefits for countries.
To sum up, I strongly believe that the advantages of spending money on university far outweigh the children education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, in fact, no doubt, such as, as a result, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 43.0788530466 37% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 304.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41447368421 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03474227321 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516447368421 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6465333513 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.615384615 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3846153846 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8461538462 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268031805001 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997376021353 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900509797423 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160587361475 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.089089396163 0.0645574589148 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 58.1214874552 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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