Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on universities. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Along with the rapid development of our society, people tend to attach more and more importance to education. Government also increase the fund in education area, such as primary education and college education. Frank speaking, I strong believe that government should spend more money on university students than very young children.
University education requires much more expensive equipment than primary schools. As is known to us, fundamental education only involves in the teaching of basic knowledge while college education focus on cultivating professional knowledge and skills. Therefore, in order to qualify university students for their future jobs, colleges are necessary to set up various labs and advance other useful facilities, which require the large amount of money.
Compared with very young children, University students make greater contributions to the society. As is known to us, university students have already gained much education and acquired tremendous knowledge while the kids have relatively limited knowledge. As a result, with equipping the ability of contributing society, university students have created many achievements, such as computer field and economy area, which do good for the whole world. Therefore, to create more impacts and innovations, governments should spend money on education of universities.
Surely, dedicating money on education of young children can benefit more people than spending money on education of college. However, we are not sure whether the investment could give us the expected reward. If it does not make a different, in the long run, the government just waste money. On the contrary, because of university students owing the ability of contributing to society, with better education, they could make obvious devotion to the successful development of a country.
In a word, with high requirement of college education and university students making more achievements, universities deserve to have a better budget in education. Therefore, for the successful development of a country, the government are supposed to spend money on the education of universities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 238, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
...ege education. Frank speaking, I strong believe that government should spend more money...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, while, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 15.1003584229 33% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 43.0788530466 23% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.0752688172 347% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1816.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 320.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.675 4.8611393121 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02664598814 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515625 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.51630824373 125% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8291272187 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 100.406767564 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358941410999 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139989369095 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117590836779 0.0737576698707 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234277134756 0.150856017488 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654323663411 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 58.1214874552 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 10.9000537634 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.247311828 156% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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