Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In any society, the contributions of scientists and engineers are more important than the contribution of artists and writers.
Beyond a shadow of doubt, contribution of both scientists and artists plays a crucial role in any society. It is an established fact that contribution/collaboration of artists and scientists has several impacts on improving a society. Technological breakthroughs are indebted to scientists and engineers, whereas artists and writers could be important in entertaining and changing people's perspective.
On the one hand, the more modern the technological devices, the more comfortable the life will be. Scientists and engineers studying a variety of aspects of life and people’s needs- that constantly change over time- have made the life much easier with their scientific discoveries. Through developing facilities such as automobile, medical equipment, and so forth that human use regularly, they could overcome problems that people have to face/challenge almost every day.
Moreover, scientists carefully investigate problems that exist in the society so as to find solutions to problems and their causes by conducting repeated tests and then transmit this information to the general public so that the life will be much more convenient/ comfortable. Therefore, not only can this promote awareness among the general public, but also people will feel secure with technological advances.
By contrast, artists and writers create something including films, novels, paintings and so on that help people to enjoy life, be relaxed when they are in stress and change their attitude towards life. This is an inescapable fact that people could resolve their issues quickly when they are in a stress-free condition; thus, artists and writers could make the life better and comfortable for people. For instance, if people enjoy life, their problems like cardiovascular diseases will be decreased which itself indicates being artists is vital in our society.
In conclusion, people have a wide variety of different physical and spiritual needs that both scientists and artists are required to meet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: ESTABLISHED_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'a fact'.
Suggestion: a fact
...ys a crucial role in any society. It is an established fact that contribution/collaboration of arti...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...gate problems that exist in the society so as to find solutions to problems and their ca...
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Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...d then transmit this information to the general public so that the life will be much more conv...
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Line 3, column 334, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...ly can this promote awareness among the general public, but also people will feel secure with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60066006601 4.8611393121 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20496883016 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567656765677 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2948787455 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164318061364 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766321190028 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720521808271 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102382830079 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912731701582 0.0645574589148 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 58.1214874552 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 10.9000537634 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.