Some students prefer to live on campus in a dormitory. Others prefer to live in an apartment or house off campus. Which do you prefer?
The campus is a gathering place for different tastes. In dormitory people with different tastes, attitudes, cultures and different traditions live together. When I think about my student life, I am glad that I have experienced living in dormitory. Living on campus in dormitory has provided me with some conditions to learn to be independent, to communicate with other people well, and to use my time for learning properly.
The first day of campus life without the presence of one's family is very hard. One reason why I am independent is I have had to adapt to different situations when I needed my family but they were far from me. Therefore I learned to do things on my own, to attempt to obtain what I need, and to be relaxed.
Moreover, living in a dormitory strengthens people’s social skills. There are many different students from everywhere in dormitory that you should learn how to behave with. I enjoy experiencing communicating with other people from some other countries since it could help me to become familiar with their different cultures, expand my knowledge and broaden my horizons and learn to manage my life more effectively.
Finally, living on campus might help you to become closer to your goals. Because, on campus, I could see some clever and bookish students that would stimulate me to study and make use of my time to promote my world knowledge that, in turn, helps me to program my time.
In conclusion, living on campus has aided me to accept difficult conditions, be patient and try making endless effort for my life. As a result, I will manage my life more properly than a person who has not experienced living in a dormitory. Therefore, I prefer to live on campus in a dormitory.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80471380471 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80477645534 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542087542088 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 618.680645161 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7682871607 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1333333333 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46666666667 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240090316759 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108940483184 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120753751112 0.0737576698707 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14344520218 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793872879189 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.