Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
News construct a huge part of peoples life as it can give an insight of what might happen in the future and what kind of decisions should an individual make. Frankly, I believe in order to obtain reliable news you sholud gather it from different sources. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explain in the following essay.
First, news can be unreliable depending on the organization that support the news center. News channels or newspapers are mostly depending on the budget provided for them and as a result some of these channels publish their news with biased instead of objective perspective. These news centers mostly provide publications that the supporting company or center can benefit from. For example there are two different poltical groups which are named left and right. News channel One which is dependent to the left category are mostly presenting ideas in favor of this group and against the right. News channel two works the same except they prefer right people so the news are in favor of this group too. So if you live in a country like Iran, you need to listen to news provided by both parties in order to make sure to receive all news.
Secondly, news can be fake and result in misconception. Looking for news in different sources can help a person to obtain best data by filtering fake news base on judgment. For instance, there was a popular singer in Iran whose name was Andy. Paparatzies published a fake news about his death in a new channel and its post was viewed on Instagram around five million times so it provided a huge amount of income for that news channel but of course it was a lie. Fake news have been a perfect source of income for news industry in the past few years and as a result a lot of people working as paparatzies have been attracted to it but it is important to extract fake news out of this huge amount of information in order to know what is really happening around us.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that you need to gather information from various sources. This is because of fake news and tendency of news channels to publish news proportionately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'constructs'.
Suggestion: constructs
News construct a huge part of peoples life as it can g...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ews center. News channels or newspapers are mostly depending on the budget provided for them and as ...
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Line 9, column 266, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'fake news'.
Suggestion: fake news
...se name was Andy. Paparatzies published a fake news about his death in a new channel and it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, frankly, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, of course, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1753.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61315789474 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52219373142 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502631578947 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0696251161 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.117647059 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3529411765 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 5.45110844103 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196335242874 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784182145848 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485905860439 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137447336068 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166694726771 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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