Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. It would depend upon educational backgrounds and individual personalities as well as the situation that we are in. In my opinion that successful job and career play a crucial role in everyone's life is an undeniable fact. Should people realize the significance of a successful job in their life, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously. These days, factories of a successful job have recently been the topic of debate among people and experts. I do believe that in the past, people are more confident to ensure their jobs. There are a lot of different reasons with high values that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that in the view of the fact that we live in the information era, and our technologies are growing faster, people compete for each other for becoming successful more than past. Not only do we have few jobs for people in the past, but also population are not more than now. Therefore, we have more people for doing a job, and people cannot become successful more.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that In the past, we have a lot of simple jobs. But, now, jobs which people want to do are really complicated. By, inventing computer jobs are more complicated than before. As a result, people cannot identify what types of jobs would lead to secure jobs.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that people have to have academic education for gaining knowledge to become familiar with some basic information and experience. People who want to have a secure and successful job have to have the educational background.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of a successful job in people's life is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to understanding why people cannot identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, then, therefore, well, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82057416268 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84096625478 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492822966507 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.0 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1892386958 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218603397724 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758503592199 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558116716099 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13880930495 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548235569921 0.0645574589148 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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