You have received a gift of money. The money is enough to buy either a piece of jewelry you like or tickets to a concert you want to attend. Which would you buy? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Different people have different opinions from these question, from their own characters, emotional concerns, and even educational backgrounds; therefore, when it comes to me I am full agree to buy a piece of jewelry. I would like to further illustrate in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, these days because of economic problems, people can't pay attention to the concert and other musical things. I believe that a piece of jewelry is a kind of investment, I will explain more clearly what I mean by an example. For instance, we can resell a piece of jewelry when we need money, sometimes when we want to buy a house, we do not have enough money than selling our jewelry can help us to prepare our requirement.
With a piece of jewelry, we can win the heart of a girl or our wife. Having some problem with our wife, we can solve it by buying a piece of jewelry. Therefore, not only do a jewelry a kind of investment but also it can help us improve our relationship with our wife.
On the other hand, after passing some advantages of a jewelry, we do not avoid advantages of a concert. We can enjoy with listening to a concert, and it becomes to relax
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 64, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ys because of economic problems, people cant pay attention to the concert and other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, for instance, i mean, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 7.30242825607 68% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 950.0 1373.03311258 69% => OK
No of words: 211.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50236966825 5.08290768461 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72830228193 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 419.366225166 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9180714482 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 110.228320801 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 21.698381199 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06452816374 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128201291728 0.272083759551 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518788735175 0.0996497079465 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385721354591 0.0662205650399 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769613713638 0.162205337803 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404676830229 0.0443174109184 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.3589403974 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.8541721854 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.2367328918 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 63.6247240618 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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