Why do you think some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are a lot of reasons with different excuses for attracting people to dangerous, some of them for money, for fun or for fame and so forth. Now because of less time, I want to focus some important reasons with high value, and in the following paragraphs I will explain more clearly my points of view.
To begin with, each age has its activities, for example when I am 20 years old, I do rollerblade in the streets without afraid, while I have a lot of fun. But now, I cannot imagine my dangerous worked in the streets.
On the other hand, if we look this another angle, we can see some reasons for doing dangerous activities. Money, it is a good reason for many people for doing dangerous activities. I will explain what I mean with an example, I had a friend in the university, he had a lot of personal problems that it cause was no money. He did very dangerous activities like jumping from building for movies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, while, for example, i mean, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 52.1666666667 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 1977.66487455 38% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 407.700716846 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40588235294 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55544063062 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 212.727598566 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664705882353 0.524837075471 127% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 618.680645161 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9438318439 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.625 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 5.45110844103 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196984192884 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957704919841 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622809607516 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129065873584 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506949438224 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 10.9000537634 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 86.8835125448 29% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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