What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This is a very debatable question. It would need to look at the different kinds of qualities of a good son or daughter then draw conclusions. Even then this question would not be to totally answer that it depends upon our individual personalities, emotional background, and even educational concerns as well as the situation we are in. I believe that honesty, hardworking, respectful, obedience are some important qualities whit high value that our children should have.
In the first place, A good son or daughter has to know his/her parents work for the comfort of their family members especially their children. In my culture, people believe that a good child should help their parents when they need them. Passing age our parents, we have to know their feelings and what they need. A good child should respect their parents. I believe that when children respect their parents, so their parents prayed them, and it is really one of the important things what we need in our life. I believe that heaven is under mother and father feet; therefore, playing by parents can help us solve problems. I strongly believe that children have to work by their parents' rules until they live under their roof.
I am 26 years old, and my parents are really old.They spent their youth for me. Since 3 years ago, my father has illnesses, and many doctors visit my father but they cannot know about it. My family is not rich, so I have decided to continue my studies abroad because of that I can help my father visit the greatest doctor for his illness. I think that I can compensate my parents hard-working.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... by parents can help us solve problems. I strongly believe that children have to ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ules until they live under their roof. I am 26 years old, and my parents are rea...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...ears old, and my parents are really old.They spent their youth for me. Since 3 years...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, really, so, then, therefore, well, as to, i think, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1977.66487455 67% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73741007194 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53015814181 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535971223022 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8632969127 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955598282814 0.236089414692 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038363031422 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442965838579 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700642702985 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518644673263 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 86.8835125448 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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