What is a very important skill a person should learn in order to be successful in the world today? Choose one skill and use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
I think this question has a lot of answers that depend upon personal interest and individual background and even emotional concerns. However, when it comes to me I believe that computer and communication skills are really important than other skills, so in the following discussing I would like some evidence to substantiate my points of view.
I believe that these days computer is one of the most important skills for people because everything needs a computer. The computer is used for their works and do their projects. For example, I am a civil engineer, and I use a computer for designing the building. In addition, If someone wants to work in a company, not only is one of the requirements having a good computer skill but also is having a good communication skill.
Having a good communication is important for life because each people needs a friend. Communication helps us to make some new friend for our life, so with a good friend, we can handle the burdens of problems.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 22, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...y points of view. I believe that these days computer is one of the most important s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, for example, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 52.1666666667 29% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 170.0 407.700716846 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79411764706 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92056898282 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 212.727598566 49% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 618.680645161 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1689536629 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120272150694 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548339287319 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427258380257 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0748240377144 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489051912597 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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