Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
The word "money" is very debatable. These days everything depends on money; therefore, I believe that these days in this world not only do we need buy goods but also for breathing we need money. In my culture, each person has more money, he or she has a good prestigious, so money evaluates the people living in my culture.
Therefore, we have to care about spending money, and we do not lose very easily. Some people believe that we have to live in a moment, and when we talk with them, they said we don't know when we die, so we have to enjoy for a moment. But I have some reasons against this opinion, in my opinion, we have to invest some part of our money which we earn.
Last but not least, if we look this question from another side, we will know some advantages of spending money. For instance, spending money can help hub of the economic wheel. Some people deposit their money in the bank, and they do not invest it; therefore, this become slump, and many people who have a job will fire.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 176, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...nd when we talk with them, they said we dont know when we die, so we have to enjoy f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 30.3222958057 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 823.0 1373.03311258 60% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 188.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37765957447 5.08290768461 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37285916473 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56914893617 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 419.366225166 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5233260786 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4444444444 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8888888889 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06452816374 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160203756654 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826201348478 0.0996497079465 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332591746929 0.0662205650399 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118516764064 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00481168611846 0.0443174109184 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.3589403974 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.0289183223 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.2367328918 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.42419426049 78% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 63.6247240618 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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