The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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The expression “Never, never give up” means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

I don't know what I am writing because I am in love with my ex-girlfriend who leaves me alone, because of that my brain has busied. In spite of the fact that I am in love, I would like to push myself for writing some reasons for my point of view for this question in the following paragraphs.
In the first place, I would like to explain my point with a reason. For instance, when I went to the English class for improving my language. So I saw her, and I didn't know what happened to me. For the first time, I think that I know her after passing a few days I told her my feeling, and I purpose her, but she said no. I never give up, and not only do I told her my feeling more and more but also I saw her a lot. Therefore, after passing two years, I can access my aim, and she said yes to my purpose. I believe that if I give up for the first time I didn't access my love.
Some people believe that for gaining a good day we have to work a lot and never give up. I strongly believe that we have to work hard and never give up in our life if we want to have good days.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: didn't
...roving my language. So I saw her, and I didnt know what happened to me. For the first...
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... that if I give up for the first time I didnt access my love. Some people believe th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in spite of, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 15.1003584229 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 52.1666666667 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 1977.66487455 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 223.0 407.700716846 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.79372197309 4.8611393121 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.48103885553 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09620032018 2.67179642975 78% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 212.727598566 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493273542601 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.51630824373 79% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8641384348 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9090909091 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2727272727 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 5.45110844103 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149850261019 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673432158739 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560820516786 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107665200836 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441439487938 0.0645574589148 68% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 11.7677419355 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 58.1214874552 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 4.7 10.9000537634 43% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.04 8.01818996416 75% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 86.8835125448 23% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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