Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A job, employee, hire, and fire, all of them are the newest topic among experts, managers, and other people who are working in some companies. Some questions have both side advantages and disadvantages. Hiring people to work us, we spend more time for training to them. and after passing time they can understand what they do. But, sometimes some employees think that a manager needs them and they do not work well, so it leads to decrease the benefit of the company.Each company has to fire employees who do not work very well. For example, In my university we have some professors are not fluent in the language and they cannot teach well and they can not speak well, so manager's university has to fire them for improving knowledge of students.
The company has to spend more time to fire these kinds of employees because managers have to train new employees. I believe that we have to choose suitable persons for our company, then in the future, we will not fire them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...e spend more time for training to them. and after passing time they can understand ...
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Line 1, column 468, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Each
... to decrease the benefit of the company.Each company has to fire employees who do no...
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Line 1, column 674, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'managers'' or 'manager's'?
Suggestion: managers'; manager's
...ch well and they can not speak well, so managers university has to fire them for improvi...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, well, as to, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 52.1666666667 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 1977.66487455 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 172.0 407.700716846 42% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65697674419 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 4.48103885553 81% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47001350984 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 212.727598566 46% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 618.680645161 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.6003584229 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4763574019 48.9658058833 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.125 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0871755548985 0.236089414692 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412055041334 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0259215747255 0.0737576698707 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064706842912 0.150856017488 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238011449727 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 86.8835125448 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.