Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Different people will give different responses to this question from their own characters and emotional concerns as well as even educational backgrounds. However, when it comes to me, I believe that travel with the companion or alone has own advantages and disadvantages. I would like to further illustrate my reasons in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I start with me. I am a sociable person, and I would like to travel with my friend or my family. Because traveling with my friends or family is really something and relaxing for me, whenever I travel with my friends or family I can forget all my problems. In this case, not only can we share all happiness but also we can help each other for preparing food.
If we look traveling from another angle, we can gain other reasons for traveling with a companion. The new place has new advantages and disadvantages I mean when we are in the new city we do not know about custom, safe place and so forth. Last year I traveled around my country with my friends, we received a new city after driving 9 hours. We need a place to take a rest, but after investigating for 2 hours we cannot find a safe place, so we stay in a park that night. Tomorrow, when we wake up we cannot find our car, do you believe that. A robber took our car. sometimes I think that was I alone, the robber could kill me.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 565, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometimes
...ou believe that. A robber took our car. sometimes I think that was I alone, the robber co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, really, so, well, i mean, i think, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1104.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43373493976 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6299303421 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 212.727598566 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566265060241 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 618.680645161 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4372151285 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8571428571 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7857142857 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177438605713 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689628142799 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563824149993 0.0737576698707 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124125115803 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0140178805732 0.0645574589148 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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