People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. It would depend upon educational backgrounds and individual personalities as well as the situation that we are in.
In my opinion that healthy body plays a crucial role in everyone's life and career is an undeniable fact.
Should people realize the significance of the healthy body in their life and studies, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
These days, The best way to staying healthy has recently been the topic of debate among psychologist and people in our province.
I do believe that exercise, eating healthy food, money, and friends can help us stay healthy. There are a lot of different reasons with high value that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that one of the best ways for staying healthy is doing exercise. Not only does exercise help us stay healthy, but also it can help us stay happy. For example, swimming is the best, because most doctors believe that swimming is the best kind of exercise for different parts of our body and if we want to be healthy we need to go swimming at least once a week.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that safe food is another factor which helps us stay healthy. We have to eat fruit each day. One of the important fruit I think is apples. I do believe in this English proverb that “an apple a day keeps the doctor away” I have tried it in my own life I eat an apple every day and I rarely get sick. Most doctors believe that apples are full of vitamins and vitamins are essential for different parts of our body; therefore, they recommend it.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that friends are another factor for staying healthy, When we have problems, we can share them with our friends. As a result, they can help us solve them. On the other hand, with our friends, we can have pleasure times. We can go walking, swimming, and we can have a small gathering.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. I think that money is another important factor for staying healthy. All factors that I mentioned useless without money. We need money for surviving. We work for money. Without money, we cannot go swimming, and we cannot exercise as well as we cannot have pleasure times.
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of a healthy body in people's life is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to understanding important factor for staying healthy, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Suggestion:
...lthy, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, second, so, then, therefore, well, at least, for example, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 76.0 43.0788530466 176% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2527.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 538.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6970260223 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81610080973 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64929882986 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46282527881 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 775.8 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 21.0 9.59856630824 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0907369569 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1379310345 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5517241379 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8275862069 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139390223393 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404824965761 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464444074235 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0632966786137 0.150856017488 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527066925766 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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