Many parts of the world are losing important natural resources, such as forests, animals, or clean water. Choose one resource that is disappearing and explain why it needs to be saved. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
This is a very debatable question. If we want to come up with some suitable answers to this question, we would need to look at the pros and the cons of this question, and then draw conclusions. Even then it would not be possible to directly answer. It would depend upon the kind of lifestyle we have, educational backgrounds, individual personalities and emotional concerns as well as the situation that we are in, and so forth.
In my opinion that water plays a crucial role in everyone's life and career is an undeniable fact.
Should people realize the significance of water in their life, they will ponder over it much more scrupulously.
These days, the importance of water in our life has recently been the topic of debate among psychologist and people in our province.
I do believe that water is one of the most important of natural resources that it is losing. There are a lot of different reasons with high value that support my point of view, and I would like to further illustrate a few of the most important ones in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I want to mention one of the primary reasons that we drink water. Our body needs it for refreshing. A huge part of our body is water. In the view of the fact that more 90% of our blood is water, most doctors believe that we have to drink 2 liters of water each day. Not only can it help us refresh, but also it can help different parts of our body woke truly.
The second reason why I advocate this point of view lies in the fact that all things in all around the world need water, such as animals, trees and so forth. The beginning of the alive is from water, as a result, water is a more important element in all around the world. Even though human needs water for surviving, trees and planet need water for exciting. Without water, all trees and planet will be destroyed.
Last but certainly not least, thinking about this question more meticulously, I would like to mention this point that water in the oceans is another source. By growing technology, oil and gas platforms are improving dramatically. Therefore, our oceans are dirty, all animals live in the ocean will kill. It is really hard to refining ocean. For example, several years ago, thanks to lacking oil from the platform in Mexico Gulf, the ocean was polluted.
Having discussed the issue from that point of view, I would rather look at it from another perspective as well. Another element that it is important for us is air. By passing time, we have a lot of cars and factories that air is polluted. Thanks to factories and cars, we have a new disease that it is global warming
By taking all above-mentioned arguments into consideration, the following conclusion can be drawn about the issue. Underestimating the disadvantages of water in people's life is not logical. Attending to this issue meticulously contributes to understanding the advantages of water in our life, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Suggestion:
...life, and can improve several aspects of personal as well as social life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, really, second, so, then, therefore, well, for example, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 52.1666666667 150% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 529.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64650283554 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79583152331 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67508198413 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.478260869565 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 770.4 618.680645161 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9572986836 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7586206897 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2413793103 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10344827586 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.53405017921 221% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165399457927 0.236089414692 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480526543467 0.076458572812 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503014881153 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0683295543612 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613368124996 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 86.8835125448 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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