Some people spend their entire lives in one place. Others move a number of times throughout their lives, looking for a better job, house, community, or even climate. Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? Use reasons and specific examples to support your opinion.
Some people want to stay a place because they have some good memories from their place, neighborhoods, etc, but other people like to move from a place to another because of some own reasons such as see a beautiful place, make friends, finding a good job with the high price.
Each place has some advantages and disadvantages. For example, my city is one of the biggest cities in Iran, but we do not have a good factory and a good university, so I have decided to continue my studies abroad. These days because of inflation, people need a good job to earn money, then it is one of the good reasons for people for moving.
In my city, most people don't like moving from place to another, because they live with their good memories, in addition in our culture people cannot find a good job, because of the fact that we do not have any factories in and around our city.
Last but not least, in view of the fact that transformation develops in the world, so some people like to move from place to another place, as they want to see the new place, make new friends, etc.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 15.1003584229 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 1977.66487455 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37185929648 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35121112036 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 212.727598566 47% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497487437186 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 279.0 618.680645161 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.2864201737 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.0 100.406767564 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307931010678 0.236089414692 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168061582729 0.076458572812 220% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768704027081 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207407626169 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605739035173 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.66 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 86.8835125448 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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