Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Youngsters make decisions about their life in many ways. Some people probably think that young generation are able to make good decision about their own life rather than depending on parents because of the technological advancements around them. In my opinion however, it is always better to depend on parents opinion to make life choices these days due to a variety of reasons.
First of all, young generation are immature to make better decision about their life, and it is always better to consult their parents who have more life experiences. Although some people argue that modern technologies help children to make well informed decision about their future, but I believe that it has nothing to do to improve children's worldliness and level of maturity. My own life experience is a compelling example of what I mean. When I finished my high school, it was my father who helped me to choose the best university for my higher studies. My dad has a very good knowledge about the academic ranking of almost all the universities around the globe , and also the advantages and disadvantages of different colleges. Thankfully, I opted the best and number one university all because of my dad's effort. If I would have not consulted my parent's opinion I might have ended up in a bad school, which would have a profound effect on my career. Thus, parent's experience and knowledge guides youngsters in the long journey of life.
Secondly, today's parents are living in a world of technology, which will help them to provide their children all means of direction in their life. In the past, parents were not exposed to Internet or any technological innovation, so their quality of guidance were limited. In the aforementioned example, my dad regularly updated his knowledge with the help of google and gmail services. He constantly e-mailed his professors to seek information and expert guidance. Additionally, he read all the reviews and details of each and every college in google, which helped me to finalize my choice of college. As a result I was able to make the best choice of my career only because of my dad's expert advice. Thus, the parent's of this generation is well advanced in terms of technological expertise when compared to parents of old generation.
In conclusion, it is always better for young generation to take guidance and advice from parents these days rather than depending own their own knowledge. This is because parents have more life experience and understanding about the world, and because most parents are well advanced in the field of technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, i mean, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 432.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97222222222 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79931439013 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.479166666667 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7252685688 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.4 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281122642862 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929336032446 0.076458572812 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988052488212 0.0737576698707 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205646782996 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859951346677 0.0645574589148 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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