Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Young people often do many things to manage their stress in today's hectic world. In fact, it is important to have a proper strategy to deal with day to day issues. Many people probably prefer to do things spontaneously without much planning because they think it is the easy way to solve issues. In my opinion however, proper planning and organizing things prior is the most appropriate way to deal with our daily problems due to a variety of reasons.
First of all, planning and organizing things will make our hectic life easy and manageable. While a well planned task will be much easier and successful to accomplish, an unplanned work will be a complete wreck at the end. For example, if a person wants to host a party can do things easily and effectively by proper planning. A well defined list regarding the things which he need to do like decorations, food, invitations and transportation must be made in prior. By following the previously prepared checklist, he can make the party a huge success. Although conducting a function include a lot of stress and hard work, a careful planning will alleviate these effort to a great extend. On the other hand, if he did not do any of these planning work prior, his party would have been a complete disaster due to the scarcity of facilities he might have forgot because of his spontaneous action . Therefore, planning and organizing is indispensable for a manageable and stress free life
Secondly, proper planning and organizing can save our precious time, which is very rare in our modern life. Time saved by planning can be used to involve in things which gives us more happiness. For example, a student who is preparing for a competitive exam by carefully planning can save a lot of time. By analyzing his requirements for the exam, he can even prioritize his weakness areas. As a result, he can dedicate more time to that particular part instead of wasting time in areas which he knows very well. In addition, time he saved by this action can be utilized in some stress relief exercises like yoga which will give him extra strength to endure the exam tension. Thus, the student can easily manage the exam with less effort and good results. Hence, time saved by effective planning and organizing can make our complicated life much better.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that it is crucial to have a properly planned and executed life to deal with the hardships of modern life. A person who does not follow this will have great difficulty and he may happen to waste a lot of time in fixing issues in his life. Thus, he may have to think of switching to properly organized and planned life later.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
... him to overcome it. In contrast, if he do not do any of prior homework, he may ha...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pensable for a manageable and happy life Secondly, proper planning and organizing...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
...tra strength to endure the exam tension.Thus the student can easily manage the exam ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...tra strength to endure the exam tension.Thus the student can easily manage the exam ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2035.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72157772622 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.673915022 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480278422274 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6097399388 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9047619048 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5238095238 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90476190476 5.45110844103 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192559901014 0.236089414692 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689666394395 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470575032582 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137635780692 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357184988918 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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