Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Nowadays, choosing true way between several detour has become more complex than pasts. There is controversy between people attitude toward make decision soulely or by dependance on parents opinion. As far as I am concerned youth own decision is more suitable for them because not only does previous old customes changes but also youth are more up to dated than their parents.
One of the most important fecet of current discussion which demandes more contemplation is that modern-day youth change in attitude,customes, and culture. In recent-day, almostly it is imposible to find uneducated youth and in any society we see eradication of ilitracy. Because of developing rate of nowadays life and access to voluminous information, plenty of attitudes and customes was changed and this led to decreasion of dependancy of young people on their parents. Todays, youth has right to make decision freely and without any people interference. By doing so, any result and consecuences of decisions returned to their ownly and there is not any way to blame or rebuke parents. For instance, there are abundance number of youth that they blame to their parent's for obliging to choosing what career they not loved and know these young have sense of wasting some years of their ages.
Another noteworthy facet of ongoing discussion is that oftenly parent can not accomodate to galoping rate of technology and tremondous proliferation of information, so they have not had information in some decision making of the young people. According to this matter, parent cannot help and consult their youth effectivly, And it is better to release their youngs to make decesion freely and solely. For example, in choosing master field in bachlor students, their parent have not had knowledge and exprience on their field of study, and it is beneficial to abandon them to pave their way solely with their interest, their knowledge, and their experince.
To summerize, modern-day youth demanded to decide independly, and by retrospect to aformentioned point about changing in costumes and developing rate of technology, It is better for parent and youth.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to true'
Suggestion: to true
Nowadays, choosing true way between several detour has become m...
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Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun detour seems to be countable; consider using: 'several detours'.
Suggestion: several detours
Nowadays, choosing true way between several detour has become more complex than pasts. The...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...es more contemplation is that modern-day youth change in attitude,customes, and c...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , customes
...hat modern-day youth change in attitude,customes, and culture. In recent-day, almostly i...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to master'
Suggestion: to master
...ly and solely. For example, in choosing master field in bachlor students, their parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 343.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21865889213 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8703330921 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542274052478 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7281123731 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.692307692 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3846153846 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345686852718 0.236089414692 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122268078668 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796612213607 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198316522337 0.150856017488 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833140482505 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 11.7677419355 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 58.1214874552 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.01818996416 118% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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