Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Nowadays something is going to happen every single minute all over the world, and thanks to social media, it is feasible to be inform about them. Personally, I believe it is kind of necessary for men and women to be aware about events and news, no matter whether they are related to them. I feel this way for two reasons, which will be explored in the following essay.
First of all, in a modern technological age, like what we are in, almost every measure and actions would eventually affect all global population in different ways. Thanks to invention of fast and economical transportation vehicles, the world could be assumed as a unit land. In fact, now it is not an accurate statement to say that some news is irrelevant to us, so why wasting time watching or reading about those. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I remember two years ago, a ship drowned in the open seas of West America's open seas, and then in my country, Iran, which is placed in Middle East, Asia, most commodities' prices increased rapidly and stayed in that level for approximately one month. So it could be surmised that there is no irrelevant events.
Second of all, with a bigger data-base individuals can analyze more profitably and make wise and more suitable decisions. Knowing about recent events causes the awareness of global trending. As a result, a human with such valuable information could be a better thinker than one who just have knowledge about his/her own surroundings. So in order to move toward wise choices and decisions for making a better living, a part of everyone's life should be allocated to following news.
In conclusion, I am of the opinion that it is essential for adults to try to be informed of things and events which take place all over the world. This is because in our modern integrated world, each action has specific effects, huge or small, on other creatures and circumstances. Also, by enhancing the knowledge, people are capable to open their minds and make appropriate decisions in their life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80681818182 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69670368113 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9891291503 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143585140425 0.236089414692 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444772226114 0.076458572812 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034079730122 0.0737576698707 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863750326386 0.150856017488 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332094486196 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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