Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about the events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they affect your daily life.
In every second, there are countless events happening around the whole world, whether affecting our daily life or not. Meanwhile, due to the rapid expansion of the Internet, it's convenient for us to acquire tons of such kind of information. However, whether to have a knowledge of the entire events occurring in the world has become a hot issue. Some individuals reckon that it's a must for us to know about all affairs in order to catch up with the trend, while the others hold contradictory views that it's not essential to know such kind of irrelevant news. As far as I'm concerned, I can't agree more with the first kind of opinion. There are several reasons accounting for my point of view.
First, during the process of globalization, the different segments of the world are closely associated with each other, which indicates that all the tiny affairs engaging in other regions may potentially exert a profound influence on our daily life. Take the inheritance tax as an example, although so far China has not levied this kind of tax, there are increasing numbers of experts suggesting to impose the inheritance tax on the rich, which has already been levied in several regions in other parts of the world, in order to improve the living conditions of the poor and narrow down the widening gap between the haves and have-nots. By having a knowledge of the inheritance tax that is currently implemented in other regions, people are capable of predicting the future changes in China resulted by the taxation. Hence, due to the potential influence that engaging affairs in other regions may exert on us, raising the awareness of events happening around the world does enable us to predict the future life we will be confronted with and make full preparation to handle the potential changes.
Moreover, keeping pace with currently occurring incidents is an excellent approach for us to widening our outlook. The vastness of the world creates an ocean of stuff we have never seen or come across. While, in the process of having a knowledge of the happening affairs, these kinds of experience helps us to expand our horizon of knowledge, which may put us in a competitive advantage situation. For instance, Jack Ma, who now is one of the richest merchants in China, predicted that there was a large potential of the development of e-commerce by keeping in pace with the development of e-commerce in various areas in the 1990s and he, based on China's actual conditions at that time, seized the opportunity to create China's e-commerce platform named Taobao. It's self-explanatory that Jack Ma's success can't be separated from his intention to have a knowledge of the entire events occurring in the world and that is why keeping pace with the current affair is of crucial significance.
Admittedly, some individuals might contradict my opinion by considering attaining information, which seems irrelevant to us, as an utter waste of time. Nevertheless, the time we spend on viewing the worldwide events is a worthy investment, not only for our current life but also for making plans for the future.
In a nutshell, having a knowledge of the incidents around the world is a necessity, which is beneficial for our life in all aspects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 377, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ot issue. Some individuals reckon that its a must for us to know about all affairs...
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Line 1, column 571, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...such kind of irrelevant news. As far as Im concerned, I cant agree more with the f...
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Line 1, column 587, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...elevant news. As far as Im concerned, I cant agree more with the first kind of opini...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r China has not levied this kind of tax, there are increasing numbers of experts ...
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Line 2, column 386, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggesting imposing'.
Suggestion: suggesting imposing
...there are increasing numbers of experts suggesting to impose the inheritance tax on the rich, which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...antage situation. For instance, Jack Ma, who now is one of the richest merchants ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n Chinas actual conditions at that time, seized the opportunity to create Chinas ...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... self-explanatory that Jack Mas success cant be separated from his intention to have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, while, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2683.0 1977.66487455 136% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91391941392 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81331856853 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489010989011 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 849.6 618.680645161 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.5301340111 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.055555556 100.406767564 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157503312407 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571570016465 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061762360633 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948318173419 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512973626943 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 58.1214874552 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.1575268817 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.