With the advancement of technology and the ease of communication it brings about, we nowadays find ourselves under the bombardment of news from around the globe. The news broadcasters compete to spread the firsthand reports they have. Sadly, most of the things that are happening are not positive and with all this negativity, one may find it more convenient to just ignore all of it and live his or her life. But I am personally inclined to believe that being aware is of great importance, for some reasons on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, the knowledge of things that are happening around the world, can even subconsciously affect the decisions that a person make, in a way that can help resolve them. For example, the more the people are aware of the extreme poverty and lack of food in some countries, the more of them would happen to have abilities that can help raise fund and equipment in order to help resolve this situation, finally making it more likely to have a group of people that would actually take action and help resolve this. If no one were to pay attention to bad things that are happening around the globe, it would be impossible to raise awareness and make the world a better place. You have to pay attention, because sometimes you are the only person that can do something about it, and it is your mission in life.
Secondly, history always repeats itself. Everything the people of a society are going through is most probably experienced by other nations before. There are a lot of lessons to be learned, in term of decisions that the nations are making, and the way that they are responding to the big or small crisis which they are facing. The more a nation or society is aware, the better decisions they are capable of making in the face of hardships. So when one starts to think globally, instead of locally and personally, awareness and attention to surrounding become additionally important, as personal lives are affected.
To wrap it up, I believe that it is, of course, better to be aware of the news, because sometimes we may be able to actively take part in some of it and take significant action, and we can learn from other nation's experiences for good.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69387755102 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62229015639 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502551020408 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 599.4 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1754645663 48.9658058833 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 100.406767564 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155378914962 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534783686822 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520347321493 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788356106051 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0613564568165 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 11.7677419355 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 58.1214874552 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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