Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
To begin with, one of the reasons why internet is more important is that it is the key to the future. What that means is that our social cannot advance without internet. Internet will improve more quickly with more money spent in it, which can contribute to a big progress of human beings. For example, information technical innovation often brings about rapid development in production.Thus,this evidence highlights that internet is the most important thing we should pay attention to in this time and age.
Another reason for this is that internet will benefit more people than public transportation. This is because nowadays internet is necessity of life. For instance,we have to contact others by internet in most situations. Therefore, we have no choice but to try our best to improve the internet.
Finally, improvement of internet is likely to lead to public transportation. If a big technical progress comes out, there will be a more efficient solution to solve the transportationproblem. Take the technology for autonomous vehicles as an example, it is believed that it can change transportation to a great extent. Given this, focusing on developing internet is the most economical and effective way of using government spending.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'big technical progress'.
Suggestion: big technical progress
...ly to lead to public transportation. If a big technical progress comes out, there will be a more efficie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, to begin with, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 52.1666666667 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 1977.66487455 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 199.0 407.700716846 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26633165829 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 4.48103885553 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32170306769 2.67179642975 124% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 212.727598566 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608040201005 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 618.680645161 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2084807884 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5833333333 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269718624124 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103435584139 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765853908948 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187871761453 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303942944358 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.