Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, people start to concern about the public equipment and many things what’s they could benefit from them.So there’s argument between the statement of the government should pay more attention to the Internet project or the public transportation . As I consider ，I suggest the government to focus on the public transportation.
To begin with,Internet is so called two-blades sword.because it’s both benefit and harmful to the people.So the government should control the public using of internet instead of letting it develop in free to prevent people from getting in addiction.
Otherwise, public transportation is also cannot be left.you know in some place especially most of the modern cities it’s still a big problem in the age.For example, in capital of China,Beijing.Some people need to take nearly 2or3 hours’ ride to get to work and the same to go home when they finish the work.So I consider it’s also important to create something new way to transport to make it more convenient to people to get traveling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: So
...hat's they could benefit from them.So there's argument between the state...
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...net project or the public transportation . As I consider ，I suggest the government...
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... project or the public transportation . As I consider ，I suggest the government to...
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Suggestion: , Internet
... public transportation. To begin with,Internet is so called two-blades sword.because i...
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... both benefit and harmful to the people.So the government should control the publi...
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...event people from getting in addiction. Otherwise, public transportation is also...
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...me to go home when they finish the work.So I consider it's also important to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, still, for example, you know, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 15.1003584229 20% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.0286738351 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 43.0788530466 28% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 1977.66487455 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 166.0 407.700716846 41% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37951807229 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 4.48103885553 80% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20462795969 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 212.727598566 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638554216867 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 618.680645161 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 41.0 20.1344086022 204% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.25357138 48.9658058833 268% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.25 100.406767564 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 41.5 20.6045352989 201% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.25 5.45110844103 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134408354175 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0973932137642 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285959826135 0.0737576698707 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971359792621 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364501045076 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 11.7677419355 210% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 58.1214874552 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.1575268817 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.81 10.9000537634 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.01818996416 122% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.4 10.0537634409 183% => OK
text_standard: 25.0 10.247311828 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.