Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
When it comes to the issue that keeping old friends is more important than making new friends, some people may agree with this idea and give us sound reasons for their beliefs. On the other hand, some other people might disagree agree with this idea. Also, those opponent could provide us with strong purposes to support their point of view. I believe that making new friend is very important. This short essay will demonstrate some point regarding my point of view.
First of all, in my opinion, it is widely understood that we get new experience in each friendship that we make. The people are different in many things. So, we have to learn how to be flexible with each type of people that we meet in our life. So, when we make new friendship we increase our ability to communicate and enjoying our time with everyone we came in touch with. While keeping our relation with the people whom we know, will make our life very boring if they were not around us.
Another reason why I advocate that making new friendship is important. We can learn new things from the people that we meet. So, making new friendship will increase our knowledge and experience in life. Additionally, they may help us to get good chance for instance getting a good job. Eventually, this will help us to detect the good people whom can be consider real friends. and never cheat be bad people
Finally, it is a well-establish fact that sometimes we have to change our city and travel to different cities. If we are used to make new friendship, we will not worrying about that. Eventually, we will enjoy our new life and feeling excited about that.
From what has been discussed above, we may draw a conclusion that says, people who hold the opposite opinion may have the right to believe in that, but my opinion and other people opinions are overwhelming too much to be ignored.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stood that we get new experience in each friendship that we make. The people are ...
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Line 6, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...ople whom can be consider real friends. and never cheat be bad people Finally, i...
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Line 8, column 63, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...establish fact that sometimes we have to change our city and travel to different ...
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Line 8, column 123, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to making'.
Suggestion: used to making
...d travel to different cities. If we are used to make new friendship, we will not worrying ab...
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Line 8, column 164, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'worry'
Suggestion: worry
...sed to make new friendship, we will not worrying about that. Eventually, we will enjoy o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 331.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64048338369 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39100534576 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510574018127 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.2377529684 48.9658058833 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8421052632 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4210526316 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175613745848 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0685593439452 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752795459329 0.0737576698707 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100172151831 0.150856017488 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917449075854 0.0645574589148 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.