Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is a significant infrastructure nowadays. We will search for some information on it, chat with our friends who is studying in another city on it, and even go shopping on it. So in this information era, almost everyone cannot live without the Internet. On the other hand, transporation also plays a crucial role in our daily life. A better transportation will save us much time on the road. There is an endless debate on whether it is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to imporve public transportation or not. From my perspective, a faster Internet will have more benefits.
First of all, Internet can provide more jobs for unemployed people. For instance, my friend Tina, who is major in arts at the university. To choose this major is due to her hobby and interest. However, it is not an easy case to find a appropriate job for her. An enthusiastic friend of her, Eric, provide her a suggestion that she can set up a website to sell her art works. In fact, it is really a good idea. Thanks to her perfect skills, she sells plenty of works on this website, and finally, she is employed by a design company. All of these achievement should owe to the Internet.
Secondly, Internet would shorten the distance of people. I am really a fan of Taylor Swift, but in my school, it seems that no one have any interest on her music. I feel really lonely since I cannot have a friend to share the happiness I gain from these melodious songs. Nevertheless, the Internet helps me a lot. I just sign up an account on Facebook, and join the fans group of her. I find that there are so many people who love her as well. On that forum, I make a lot of friends and talk with them every day. These friends enrich my life and let me feel that I am not alone any more.
Indeed, public transportation is also a huge project and have a close connection to citizens' daily life. For example, in the past, our city did not have an airport. If we wanted to fly to another far city, we have to drive to the capital city of the state, it cost so much time. And now we can take a plane in our own city, to some extent, it facilitate our life enormously. Nevertheless, it also spent much money constructing a new airport. So we should consider whether it deserves. We cannot take planes every day, but we will use the Internet frequently. Therefore, if we think about the usage of these infrastructure, I will say that Internet is more important.
In conclusion, Internet will give us more benefit, and I think it is the best chioce for govenments to invest more.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...However, it is not an easy case to find a appropriate job for her. An enthusiasti...
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Line 3, column 541, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this achievement' or 'these achievements'?
Suggestion: this achievement; these achievements
...is employed by a design company. All of these achievement should owe to the Internet. Secondl...
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Line 7, column 344, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'facilitates'?
Suggestion: facilitates
...ane in our own city, to some extent, it facilitate our life enormously. Nevertheless, it a...
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Message: Did you mean 'this infrastructure' or 'these infrastructures'?
Suggestion: this infrastructure; these infrastructures
...erefore, if we think about the usage of these infrastructure, I will say that Internet is more impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47157894737 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70629593229 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513684210526 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.86738351254 375% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6144331102 48.9658058833 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.375 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.84375 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4375 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150587177593 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0391201312666 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660544689661 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968377511449 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686952522922 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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