Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most people can solve important problems in their lives by themselves or with the help of their families. Help from the government is unnecessary.
Nobody can deny there are some problems during individuals' life. some people believe that they can solve all problems by themselves, on the other hand, others stay another side of the table and subscribe that there are a few problems which are just solved with help of the government. As for as I am concerned, I agree with the second group’s perspective. I will elaborate on the momentous reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.
The first compelling reason worth mentioning is that <span style="font-size: 19.36px;">when </span>people face with huge problems which never do they or their family are able to solve that such as crucial disease, scholarship for research and so forth. In other words, for those problems, a person requires a lot of money, and he cannot afford each of them. For instance, my father needed to surgery because he suffered from colon cancer. At that time, we were in the tight budget, therefore, if the government did not help us by supporting a major part of expenses, definitely, we would not find a way to help him. As a result, in some situations, helps of the government is necessary.
The second important reason that comes to mind is that some problem rise up because of the interference of governments, and people have no roles on rose issues. In addition, sometimes countries create problems by making wrong decisions, as result, people encounter extra problems and everyone cannot solve because those problems are exactly related to the government. For example, war, inflation and so forth are the problems which should solve and control by a government such as leaders or presidents. therefore, some concerns enter our lives and make difficulties, while we are not able to find a solution.
In conclusion, I believe that I just mentioned a corner of matter, but due to the reasons mentioned above, people cannot solve big problems and also some problems relating to the government by themselves.
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...vernment such as leaders or presidents. therefore, some concerns enter our lives and make...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, while, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08074534161 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05827938523 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0484510479 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.857142857 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 5.45110844103 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269119673212 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0819696934982 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546256713935 0.0737576698707 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158834039707 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445956044294 0.0645574589148 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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