Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents today are more involving in their children's education than were parents in the past.
Since the invention of the language, humans were seeking literacy in different forms. Since education has contributed to societies' development, there is significant regard in this area. When it comes to parents' involvement in their kids' education, as far as I'm concerned, their influence has declined over recent years, which I'm going to substantiate this claim with two reasons hereunder.
To begin with, nowadays, parents' working condition has got worse, thereby, barely do they find any spare time to focus on their kids' educational matters. To bear the expenses of livelihood in our modern era, individuals have to spend most of their diurnal hours at work. According to some statistics, for example, office employees work for 9 hours on average a day. As a result, with all the tension and exhaustion they would encounter in working hours, it's less likely to have any time and energy for helping youngsters with their lessons. My real-life experience can drive this fact home. When I was in elementary school, both my parents used to go to work from early in the morning until late in the evening. I would complete all my schoolwork even before their return from the workplace. Even if they could get a to get some time off, they were totally reluctant interfering in how I usually do my homework.
Secondly, along with our ever-shifting world today, educational materials are also in constant alteration, making it impossible for parents to keep pace with them. In the past, education simply meant learning how to learn and write and maybe doing some basic arithmetic. Therefore, some parents would have been able to teach their kids on their own. Since schools were not too strict on students exams, they could have passed their test with the aid of their parents. On the contrary, children are being taught a wide range of courses in schools these days. Various methods of teaching besides books which are undergoing lots of adjustments every year, it's an arduous path for parents to stay tuned with all these new-coming concepts.
To sum up, having considered all the aforementioned reasons and points into account, evidently, parents' engrossment in their kids' education has decreased over recent decades. Not only are they too busy with their jobs to have free time checking their kids' schoolwork, but also the continual change of school materials is keeping parents out of students' educational path.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'parent'.
Suggestion: parent
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Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, of course, as a result, on the contrary, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2023.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 399.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0701754386 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66956708116 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591478696742 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4109398112 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.473684211 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36842105263 5.45110844103 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.88709677419 266% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269374085431 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795267097246 0.076458572812 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532697003091 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174124448443 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464752601809 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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