Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Whether or not people benefit more from traveling mother country than the journey to abroad places? In my point of view, I think moving to different parts of the world has myriad advantages than just roaming in our own country. I feel this way for a few reasons, which I will explore in the following passage.
First of all, traveling abroad will have increased job opportunities, because of the availability of a wide variety of educational systems. Education is has become indispensable in the present day, in order to get a better profession.
My own experience is a compelling example of this. I did my bachelor's in agriculture field. I was interested to pursue further in my career; unfortunately, I couldn't find any college’s that offers master in agriculture at my place. Later, I applied to the University of Texas A, which was renowned for the agricultural sector. Ultimately, I got admission and migrated to The USA. Consequently, I did my post-graduation with a gold medal; also got a lecturer post in the same campus. Hence, I started to earn more money. As the saying goes “Killed two birds with one stone”. In my opinion, If had not moved to a foreign country I would not be thriving today.
Next, going to different place helps to increase knowledge, because of diversity in culture. For instance, In India, during my school days, I was thought the regional language called Kannada.
At that time, I was not good at English. My friend Mr.Sam went to Germany two year back to do higher education in automobile engineering and was speaking English fluently. It inspired me as well to move to a foreign and study. Hence, I decide and went to The USA. I could see students from different part of the world in my college. Eventually, I learned different languages and their culture like English, Chinese, Korean, Spanish. If I had not decided to explore a different place, I would not be learned a wide variety of languages and knowledge.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is very beneficial for people to explore a different country. This is because it provides them extensive employment opportunities and because it helps them to advance their education and knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, so, well, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1892.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 374.0 407.700716846 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05882352941 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21426853349 2.67179642975 120% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.2693399136 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146464186771 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0416373085146 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0714761928867 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0738187071404 0.150856017488 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080378162871 0.0645574589148 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.