Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Traveling is a global pivotal factor that enhances people knowledge of world and broaden the opportunities to know new people and cultures. It is an ubiquitous agreement that travelling is an beneficial experience in many aspects for travels of all ages. I disagree with the statement that is more advantageous for people to travel in their own countries instead of traveling to foreign countries. I feel this way for the following reasons.
Firstly, traveling abroad is an amazing opportunity to learn or to improve your ability to speak another language. Practicing to talk with natives in their own countries is an excellent way to know how well is your level in the foreign language. Furthermore, is a fundamental way to stay confident and lose the ashame of speaking another language in public or with natives. For example, last year after I completed the basic level of my French course, I went to Paris to know the city of love and mainly to know how well was my ability to speak and understand people in French.
Secondly, another benefit to travel to foreign countries is the possibility to know, experience and learn about a completely different culture from our own. Altough travel in our own country is an enhancement experience, we already know suficiently abou our own people, customs and different foods. Nevertheless, these unique characteristics of foreign countries we only experience if we went. For instance, I wanted to see snow and enjoy the winter, hence, I chose to go to Switzerland instead of go to the south of my country because it is an opportunity to know a different culture of mine, since both have beautiful nature and special winter season.
Finally, traveling abroad is a chalenge experience for every travelers. It requires preparation and planing, all day trip we will have different situations to deal with and ameliorate as a person. For example, the chalenging situations with the new language, new types of foods or even customes and behaviors that sound strange for us but are completely normal in some culture.
To sum up, I strongly disagree with the statement that traveling in our own county is more beneficial than traveling abroad. This is because traveling to another country is an excellent opportunity to practice another language, and because it is a chalenging experience that allow us to know a different and ineffable culture.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: a
... to know new people and cultures. It is an ubiquitous agreement that travelling is...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ubiquitous agreement that travelling is an beneficial experience in many aspects f...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reign countries. I feel this way for the following reasons. Firstly, traveling...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1998.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 396.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04545454545 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94734510692 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472222222222 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 638.1 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7717975756 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.529411765 100.406767564 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2941176471 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23529411765 5.45110844103 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277852533875 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106967886725 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112881493527 0.0737576698707 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166734292069 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885841416262 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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