Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People should get a secure job right away rather than wait for a satisfactory one.
Throughout the history, Job has played an important role in people's lives. People always need to meet some of their requirements by paying money and because of that they need to assign some of the hours of each day to do an action for making money which is called job. But there is still a confusion among people regarding to job opportunities. They believe that one person should accept the secure job offer immediately rather than wait for a satisfactory job. From my sight this claim is not acceptable; I will imply my two most important points of view in following paragraphs.
The first reason crossing the mind at first glance is that by working on a satisfactory job, workers creativity will get high. Every day when a satisfied worker goes on his or her work place, has more willing to do the job correctly in a short time. According to this tendency, the worker tries to do every details in a way that causes the least time wasting. The creativity has important effect on the workers professional level and causes improving job skills. Recent researches indicates that when a person is satisfied and happy with the job occupying, his or her creativity will become up to 80 percent and the upcoming creativity will have a good impact either on the work environment and the other co-workers behavior.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that, when a person is satisfied with the job, will be happy and that happiness coming from doing a satisfactory job, prevents some mental illnesses such as depression and reduce the stress. Working on a joyful work causes the brain to release Dopamine hormone. This hormone plays an important role on controlling a person’s feelings and it increases the energy level. The more the energy level is, the more the efficiency will be. Thus having more efficiency would gain more output and more speed in doing works.
Finally, the other noteworthy point supporting this opinion is that a satisfactory job prevents the working times being routine. Routine tasks lend themselves to boredom and drudgery, causing employees to become unmotivated to perform at a high level. The lack of motivation causes the workers not doing their jobs till the deadlines, also causes the workers leave their work places more. Some researchers state the unmotivated persons may need rather than one or two weeks to get the happiness and motivation back to their lives.
To put it briefly, all the mentioned reasons converge to the point that People should wait for a satisfactory job rather than get a secure job right away. I highly recommend that people consider this decision as a noticeable one, not just an ordinary decision, and stick to their favorites to achieve a better work experience. Also it is necessary for everyone to get some consultation before choosing a job and should take a look at every aspects of a job.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...and because of that they need to assign some of the hours of each day to do an action for m...
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Line 8, column 328, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...es to achieve a better work experience. Also it is necessary for everyone to get som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, but, finally, first, if, look, may, regarding, so, still, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2395.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 489.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89775051125 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70248278971 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70237796689 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.492842535787 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 745.2 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1937568144 48.9658058833 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.863636364 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2272727273 20.6045352989 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287232040552 0.236089414692 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886024742644 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111333733534 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179953117815 0.150856017488 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116486934379 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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