Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Multi-tasking skill has a great influence on our lives. It is one of the most important skills that successful people should have because it impacts our practical lives directly. Therefore, I agree with the statement that because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few well. This is due to the fact that people have a limited amount of time per day, and every field of work have high expectation.
To begin with, doing many different things at the same time can result in failures in many of them because they have a limited amount of time per day. In fact, people can get lost when they have so much to do due to the fact that they can burn out. For example, if someone has a passion for acting, cooking, and playing football, he or she can not manage to be professional in all of them because each of them needs a lot of practice in order to be master in them. With the fact that we have only 24 hours per day, it is nearly impossible become an expert in them all at one time. Furthermore, having many tasks to do per day can be exhausting and lead to many psychological and anger problems since this small failure can build up and lead them to explode in anger waves. Thus, I believe that people should focus fewer but perfect things instead of being busy doing many things, and accomplish none of them.
Another reason why I think this is the ultimate approach is that each field of work has high expectations. Indeed, with the advance in education these days, people need to have more than basic knowledge in order to succeed. For instance, in order to have a high paying job, and have a higher chance for promotion, people need to study more and have mastered at least to be qualified for such an opportunity. On the other hand, doing so many things can be distracted and can be a suppresser for having a degree in the first place.
For the aforementioned reasons, I genuinely agree that people who do more than one thing at one time, accomplish less as total. Hopefully, people will start to focus in doing one thing in time in order to have better results for themselves as individuals and for the whole community that they work for.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...t that because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few well. This is ...
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Line 1, column 292, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun well seems to be countable; consider using: 'few wells'.
Suggestion: few wells
... so many different things, they do very few well. This is due to the fact that people ha...
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Line 3, column 22, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...h expectation. To begin with, doing many different things at the same time can result in f...
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Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... one thing at one time, accomplish less as total. Hopefully, people will start to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, as to, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, to begin with, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1779.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 398.0 407.700716846 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46984924623 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4382075774 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484924623116 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6049199423 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.1875 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.625 5.45110844103 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273755795847 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117027844266 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141543004035 0.0737576698707 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189934548214 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0666939550647 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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