Considering the harsh economic condition existent in today’ life, civils is forced overworking due to accommodating with new circumstances. In fact, they are going to confirm their extent of activities with their demands which led them to spent more time in response to their needs. In this regards, some people believe that doing various activities lessen the qualities of the results. However, others disagree. I am of the opinion that the more exerting different activities the less quality perform. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, it goes whit out saying that in order to rich thrive operation in different work should spend an an ample time. When people have finite time but persisting on doing various job, they can’t become success to accomplish all of them in perfect. One of my own experiences is a good case in point. I was working in three different job in a day in order to correspond my family’s requirement. On one hand I didn’t each of the project was entailed to spend distinct time to be accomplished. On the other hand, doing three project in one day needed an ample time. unfortunately, I couldn’t spend the distinct time for every project, at the end of the month one of them didn’t finish and my boss was wholly discontent. this is an explicit example which shows that If I worked in one project and finished it in on time mood, I would have flourish in one project which gave me a new opportunity to heighten my sheer ability in that case.
Secondly, given subject that physical and mental preparation would help individuals to become prosperous in their daily duty. In fact, work could be accomplished by being prepper mentally and physically. For example, over the periods of my study in university I was working in a restaurant as part time job so as pay the tuition fee which universities required. This circumstances forced me to work overzealous every evening till night, which make conflict in my sleeping time every morning. Although, I gained more money, which was enough to cover all my expense. I had loosed all my morning classes which lead my grades become under average and my scholarships had been eliminated by administrative office. This example clearly illustrates that If I hadn’t been work during my study, I would have gain better result in my study.
In conclusion, I firmly agree with the statement that less qualification will be happen during doing different activities. Doing different jobs not only need spending ample time but also need physical and mental preparation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 287, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ore time in response to their needs. In this regards, some people believe that doing...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: an
...peration in different work should spend an an ample time. When people have finite tim...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'an' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: an; an
...peration in different work should spend an an ample time. When people have finite tim...
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Line 2, column 340, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'job' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'jobs'.
Suggestion: jobs
...point. I was working in three different job in a day in order to correspond my fami...
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Line 2, column 570, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...roject in one day needed an ample time. unfortunately, I couldn’t spend the distinct time for...
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Suggestion: This
...nish and my boss was wholly discontent. this is an explicit example which shows that...
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Line 2, column 842, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'flourished'.
Suggestion: flourished
...nished it in on time mood, I would have flourish in one project which gave me a new oppo...
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Line 3, column 294, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ersity I was working in a restaurant as part time job so as pay the tuition fee which uni...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o need physical and mental preparation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2159.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 440.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90681818182 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81697096421 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536363636364 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2196239098 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8695652174 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1304347826 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.60869565217 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108843720472 0.236089414692 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365757863783 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495943222686 0.0737576698707 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928557881122 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672109184318 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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