Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the development of economy, company and industry becomes more busy than before, which brings many heavy works to employees, making them feel somewhat overwhelmed. Under this circumstance, some people suggest that it is better for individual to handle very little things well rather than doing many of different things. From my perspective, I agree with this statement and the reasons are as below.
First and foremost, handling very few things doesn't mean that we fail to solve entire problems. On the contrary, if we use advanced technology, permitting us to manage many of repeated works simultaneously, to handle some major assignments, it could save our energy and also engender same results. So, what's the point of doing so many heavy works while many of them could be easily replaced by other tools? In order to accomplish this, we should spend our extra time on learning advanced technology, analyzing entire system and proposing possible optimization to solve problems efficiently.
Furthermore, for the company, employing workers with talent skill is more economy and time-saving. Acknowledging that the more time people solve a single work, the more unskilled ability he have, company should cut expenses as possible so as to make a profit. Hiring one people could save more money than haring tens. For instance, my brother established his own company last year. At the beginning, he received plenty of apply forms, and passed most of them. But as the time went by, he realized that though the revenue of company is increasing, the profit is still lower, sometimes deficit. Gradually, he has to distinguish each of employees based on how much time could they resolve their works per day. He then fired plenty of employees, and raised the basic salary of rest of them. Finally, his company became more profitable, thanks to his reduction and promotion.
Admittedly, some people believes that hard-working is always a good quality in the job-market. Although it sounds plausible, many of them are simply limited in their comfortable zone and refute to make progress in advanced area. It is not suitable for the throat-cutting society nowadays, which needs us to work together with team and make innovation.
In a nutshell, I agree with the statement that we should do very few things well rather than doing so many things.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, still, then, well, while, as to, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1973.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12467532468 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7467259217 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 608.4 618.680645161 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9438355695 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.65 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23126743265 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687833496947 0.076458572812 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111339506001 0.0737576698707 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182712510708 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16360076263 0.0645574589148 253% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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