Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, plenty of restriction has established in order to maintain the harmony of society, especially the rules for youngsters. some argues that those rules that societies today expect young people to follow are too strict. From my perspective, those rules are proper to build a good standard for youngsters nowadays, and the reasons are as below.
First and foremost, in the contemporary society, young people are facing with tremendous of temptations which could do harm to them. nowadays, people are always suffering from tough job or complicated relationships among co-workers and superiors, and consequently, most of young people tend to relax themselves by different ways, including legal things or even illegal stuff, such as drugs, over drinking and so on. under this circumstance, some strict policies or rules can prevent those young people from destroying themselves entirely. For instances, the punishment of drunk drive can let those people consider their future life and refuse to drink wine if they are going to drive car.
Furthermore, strict rules can build a good standard for youngsters and help them to build a healthy and authentic relationship with stangers. As is known to us, most of the policies and rules are trying to eliminate bad behavior during our daily life. For instances, if there is no rules to punish the behavior of hurting people on purpose, then most of the youngsters, which are easy to lose control of their temper, will hurt the people who are just having different opinion. Moral standard is so weak that it is unable to limit people efficiently. under this circumstances, there is no more relationships can be built through these hurting behaviors. so, strict rules can help us to maintain our emotion and talk to others as friendly as we can, and as a result, a strong and healthy friendship is being built.
Admittedly, some rules are probably too strict to youngsters nowadays, because it base on the early society which is quite different to contemporary society. However, we should change these outdated rules by a advanced way instead of canceling them. The reasons is that the original intention of these rules is to solve those problems that hindering the development of youngsters, so it is still useful since the problems may occur again.
In a nutshell, I disagree with the statement that the rules are too strict for youngsters nowadays to obey it, because it can prevents young people from destroying themselves and helps them to build a strong relationship with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2147.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09976247031 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80814146904 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501187648456 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2759194535 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.294117647 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7647058824 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05882352941 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250136519211 0.236089414692 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876111789474 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0951940801456 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159896463914 0.150856017488 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640715126074 0.0645574589148 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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