Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the accelerating development of educational system in our society, professors tends to seek for a better circumstances and condition than before. From my perspective, in order to improve the quality of universities' education, it is proper for them to develop the basic salary and bonus of professors for the following reasons.
first and foremost, with a higher salary, university is more likely to employ skillful professors than others, because it shows its respect to the worker with high-end skill. Nowadays, everyone in society is facing with heavy economic burden, especially for most of professors who are focusing one their own topics. they are always ignoring market demand, which means that their working are probably unprofitable or unsuitable for current market. if the university refuse to raise their wages, they only have to give up what they study for making living, which is a total disaster to the development of scientific area.
Furthermore, university should spend more money on salaries not only for their professors but also for students. it is obvious that college students are ought to participate some academic works with their professors. And if the professors are suffering from the low payment, they are not able to support the children with comprehensive contribution. For example, my brother is studying in a university now. one of the teachers in his lab always ask him to attend some collaborative projects with off-campus companies. At first, he think it is just a easy work, but as the time goes by, he realizes that the tremendous problems and messy things are scattering his energy and completely waste of his time. but the purpose of the teacher is simply want to earn some money from his work. So, insufficient wages brings all the complicated and unnecessary troubles as above shows.
In a nutshell, it is a sensible strategy that improving the basic salaries and bonus as well, which could benefit both of professors and students and engender a respectful circumstances towards intelligent and diligent people in the contemporary society.
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... towards intelligent and diligent people in the contemporary society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20474777448 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93819496226 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587537091988 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.686571272 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.933333333 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4666666667 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226202227177 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076820837103 0.076458572812 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795192321885 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128357522256 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578323401034 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 10.002688172 150% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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