Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, people have more opportunities to choose the satisfying job than before. But some people argues that we should hold the chance when we can get a secure job rather than waiting for the job that would be more satisfying. From my perspective, I agree with this opinion and the reasons are as below.
First and foremost, secure job is by no means an unsatisfied job constantly.With recent thirty years, our society has witnessed and experienced the development of science and technology which has pervade to each and every aspects of life, especially to our jobs market. Under this circumstances, we cannot deny that there is a possibility that our works would be changed by outstanding technology, and thus most of the shortcoming before would be eliminated once and for all. there is amount of examples to explain the convenience of modern technology, such as computers helps to calculate the account, simulate the trends of stocking market. With these advanced supplements, our works can be more satisfied in the future.
Furthermore, for most of ordinary people, secure job is the key to let them keep pace with the rapid speed in society. As an old saying goes, housewife can not cooking if she has no any rices. instead of waiting for a work which might not coming ever, we should consider ourselves and our family. making a living is the most important things that let us to survive in the society. For example, my brother who used to seek a perfect job otherwise refuse to work, has suffered from his unreasonable imagination of career. What he was seeking for is pretty high that he cannot reach it merely depends on his abilities. after his girlfriend left him and parents dismissed, he realized that he should find a secure job instead of boundless waiting. Surprisingly, he keeps his life on courses after getting normal work.
Admittedly, there is still some people who has a big dream to fulfill wants to wait for the great opportunity to change their lives. Although I appreciate the mindset and persistent character, I believe that the leap of conditions of each person is undesirable and density's favor. So, we should better to hold every chance in our hand instead of seeking the remote possibility.
In a nutshell, we can draw a conclusion that getting a secure job is more proper and readily than waiting for a satisfying job. Because the secure job would not always being unsatisfied and making living is the prominent through our lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2078.0 1977.66487455 105% => OK
No of words: 425.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88941176471 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77925483528 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536470588235 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2940535374 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.9 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327120563231 0.236089414692 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962177936831 0.076458572812 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897240387835 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207949342814 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123887352165 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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