Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Nowadays, with the advent of modernization, students are able to learn different types of knowledge efficiently by internet. Consequently, there is an argument that whether students will be benefit more from studying broadly or speicalizing in only one field. From my perspective, people, in the contemporary society, are more valuable as taking several subjects simultaneously, and the reasons are as below.
Nowadays, the skill of studying extensively as an important factor in achieving success gradually becomes one of the most popular requirements not only in college but also in companies. requisites of these organizations are refer to solve the problems either timely or correctly, and thus people with comprehensive skills could make a better performance than others. For instances, a computer engineer is asked to make a powerpoint to introduce their application project, and thus those people who has learned more aesthetic knowledge could create a beautiful powerpoint and highlight the importance of their products precisely. so, with a broad knowledge, people are more likely to win the fierce competition in society.
What’s more, learning broadly help us to relax ourselves which benefit our mental health condition. A survey conducted by experts from Peking University shows that over 78.77 percent of people feel more comfortable when reading fictions and novels. In this process, people can ease their mindset and study the literature as well, and as a result, they might write some words to express their feelings in a better way.
Admittedly, some people claims that most of the outstanding experts only specialize in one field which makes them unique and irreplaceable. this statement sounds reasonable. However, we should not ignore the fact that most of us are just ordinary people, so being prominent might be a difficult object to achieve. thus, we should better consider our works and lives instead of making huge contribution to academic area. Under this circumstance, learning various type of knowledge plainly is a proper approach for us to achieve personal goal.
In a conclusion, learning widely can provide us not only a opportunity to get a better career but also a method to relax ourselves, which are requisites of our ordinary people to fulfill the life goal.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 363.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39669421488 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9858853353 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592286501377 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 612.0 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8232814556 48.9658058833 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.4375 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6875 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 5.45110844103 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106847788451 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367363852903 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0231363259085 0.0737576698707 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0566190263326 0.150856017488 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315321126481 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 11.7677419355 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 10.9000537634 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.01818996416 119% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 86.8835125448 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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