Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not make their social or political views known to students in the classroom. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the statement that teachers should not make their social or political views know to students in the classroom, and the reasons are as below.
First of all, in the contemporary society, youngsters have a weak cognitive ability which prevents them from understand things by comprehensive mechanism. So, they could be highly affected by their teachers views that they even don't know what the actual meaning and seeking is. For instances, young people might be brainwashed by his teacher's racism views and then turn to bully those minority children. what's more, children will form a hater mindset and become extreme because of teachers' impacts. it is very horrible that they try to hurt innocent people with some sort of 'reasonable' thoughts.
Furthermore, teacher are unnecessary to let children know about their political and social opinion because it is not their work. For teachers, teaching knowledge is always the first thing to complete instead of showing off their personal views. If teachers can not even finish their main work, why should parents expects them can make their children progress and develop? There were a sobering example occurred last month. In hong kong, students were influenced by the misleading of teachers, and they choose to put a violence on police, harass those innocent resident of China. what they did are totally deteriorate hong kong's social environment and destroy the happy living of local residents. but as the news reported, most of students even have no idea about the views made by teachers, they just follow it without any thinking of its consequences.
Admittedly, teachers also have rights to stand for their point and spread it. but, they should be careful about which kind of listeners are proper, and especially exclude the children and other mental immaturity people. For instances, employees in factories, grocery owner, or housewife can be good audiences, since they have a relatively mental maturity to hold the standpoint. it will benefit both of them through a thorough conversation.
In a nutshell, teachers are definitely not supposed to spread their political and social views towards children in classroom because of the immature mind of children. However, they could choose another people with mental maturity to propagate their own views.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for instance, in fact, kind of, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1945.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24258760108 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63380525663 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568733153639 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4047618813 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.368421053 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247758605636 0.236089414692 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821213836992 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116732723039 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201214716068 0.150856017488 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.174247720102 0.0645574589148 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 10.9000537634 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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