Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of modern society, people are facing with numerous and complicated relationships than before. Some people contend that it is important for people to maintain friendships with a small group of people over a long period of time rather than making new friends with many people in order to gaining happiness. From my perspective, the ability to build friendship easily is more significant under circumstance nowadays, and the reasons are as below.
First and foremost, in the contemporary society, people, especially the youngsters, are facing with plenty of difficult problems during their working time. When confronting with unfamiliar situation, people are more likely to find the help from others instead of searching by their own. so, if we have the ability to communicate with another peer in a comfortable way, then we are more likely to get information and help from them easily. From instances, if a employee are dealing with a problem without anyone's aiding, he will probably being distracted by plenty of unnecessary information, which can be taught by his superior or co-worker to avoid it.
Furthermore, the ability to making new friends easily is also the same way to maintain the relationships with old friends for a long time, which can help us to achieve happiness simultaneously. A survey conducted by Peking University shows that over 94.29% of people contend that they will be unfamiliar with their old friends after 6-8 month if no conversation. In this case, we hardly know anything about our old friends, including their favourite pop-stars, their new hobbies, or other basic changes that unknown to us, which means that we should rebuild those relationships as same as we have done to the new friend. Consequently, we are possessing a strong, authentic friendship again due to the ability of making new friends readily.
Admittedly, people tends to play with the person they met before, especially elder who are not willing to establish new relationship or accept the new things on purpose. so, it is important for those elder to maintain the lasting relationship with the old friends, which benefit more for them to cherish the valuable memory and exciting experience. But, for our youngsters, making more relationships with different types of people is essential and significant for us to get the latest information, so as to achieve our life goal efficiently.
In a nutshell, I agree with the statement that it is more important for us to making more friend easily rather than maintain frienships with old friend for a long time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2161.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13301662708 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92722555776 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496437054632 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.9485031179 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.066666667 100.406767564 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0666666667 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26666666667 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450549566048 0.236089414692 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163331927992 0.076458572812 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119981748074 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.29009891675 0.150856017488 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12285630096 0.0645574589148 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 11.7677419355 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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