Do you agree or disagree with the following statements？ Because people are busy doing so many different things, they do very few things well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Life difficulties increased dramatically in recent decades. Research clear that the plethora of increase in population in contrast to the reduction in resources effect negatively on people standard, welfare, and happiness in their life. Many people try to take many jobs in two or even three shifts to put all their families request come true as possible.But,once wise man said," two ball can not hold by one hand." doing many tasks effect on how effectivly and efficiently the tasks will be done. Personally, I strongly believe these tasks will not be on all its faces in convenient way for different reasons.
To begin with, the time consumed in doing many things will surely lead to effect the productivity quality of the end result. Person who manage many jobs will have no time to finish them all as properly as he wants it to be. ending him with doing some perfectly but many others un complete. For instance, many women complain of timeis not enogh to finish all their tasks. the women who works two shift and needs to do chores at the end of the day will be definitely loss control of one of these tasks.
Moreover, concentration on doing many jobs will be hard to handled by human beings, Medical scientists and researchers prove that each part of our brain are responsible for seperrated tasks for reading,writing, vission, hearing etc. they found that it is hard for human brain to hold a good and convenient concentration to do many jobs at the same time. For instance, they make a n experiments on 18 years old people by giving some of them few tasks and the other group give them two extra then the first group. The end result comes that the first group finish their work effectively than the other group wich end by unfinished three tasks. These fact prove the effectivness and quality income of the job will decrease dramaticlly by many tasks
in conclusion, Although some people argues that the person can hold different jobs and could be done very coherently ,according to my sunstained personal view, I believe this jobs will be never done in perfect ways as we expected to it
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in contrast to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77868852459 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70769438573 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 212.727598566 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540983606557 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.771913688 48.9658058833 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.928571429 100.406767564 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.6045352989 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.64285714286 5.45110844103 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15206957848 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061956421329 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523576215118 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949106597716 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385868548746 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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