Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? The knowledge we gain from personal experience is more valuable than the experience we gain from book.
Always, discussing between printed sources' experience are more valuable than personal experience or not, is a challenging story. Some people are leading proponents to the claim that the best experience that we gain is from books. However, I firmly believe that the own experience that we gain is more valuable than the printed sources. In the following paragraph, I will elaborate on my viewpoint by introducing two reasons.
The first remarkable point to be mentioned is that all books are not always accurate and contradict what we can find in the real world. Some books are not written by experts, and these people don't have enough information about the whole of a topic that they write about it. Although an author knows all of the elaborates about a topic and write his/her book accurately, it is very hard to cite it. In my individuals' experience, when I wanted to travel to Chabahar, a south city in Iran, I read some books and articles about there. Almost all of the printed sources said that the city is not safe, and this city doesn't have friendly people. After I travel to Chabahar, I visited a lot of friendly people, and that city was safe. According to my experience with this issue, I believe that some written books can be inaccurate.
The second reason I would like to mention is that the knowledge we gain from personal experience stays in our mind longer than the experience we gain from books. When a person tests one thing for the first time, this experience stays as well as in his/her mind. For example, when I went to university, I studied a lot of books about different topics and subjects. After six years that finished university, I don't remember all of them. In contrast, about my traveling, I remember everything with all of the elaborates about it.
To wrap it up, all the reasons, as mentioned earlier, lead us to the conclusion that the knowledge we gain from personal experience is more valuable than the printed sources. It happened because all books are not always accurate, and the knowledge we gain from experience stays in our mind longer than the knowledge we gain from books.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, for example, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75880758808 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.622270171 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444444444444 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.180250943 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.5555555556 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443074367702 0.236089414692 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145699840605 0.076458572812 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.166686732966 0.0737576698707 226% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335784858019 0.150856017488 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170206223248 0.0645574589148 264% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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