Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Successful people try new things and take risks rather than doing what they already know how to do well.
Even though many psychologists and some of the people argue as if it a general truth if people try to learn and do novel things they cannot progress and that is a risky work, I firmly recommend that people who want to have a perfect future and to be successful person should accept lots of risks, and also perform and search innovative subjects and issues in their jobs, life, and etc. And believe it or not, technology and universe are improving and modifying. I will elaborate my idea with significant reasons in the following paragraphs.
One of the reasons coming to my mind at first is that, in modern world, new knowledge and wisdom not only is necessary and important for individual, but also is influential and impressive in high level of situations. As a matter of fact, when a society is developing, community members should try to learn and explore danger matters. As an example, a lot of new technology in most of schools, universities, offices and etc. is drastically increasing, so if a person don’t attempt to encompass these complex technics, he/she won’t be a successful person in different circumstances. As you can see, for improving in a job needs more and more effort and this is dangerous. For instance, ….
Another remarkable reason is that, a brave and hero character is a person who is risk taker and never escape from unfamiliar tasks. The famous people have a rule that doing risky activities are not only destructive, but also creative, useful, and beneficial. These people are really eager to accept the challenges of the new jobs. For instance, my teacher is a well-known person in the my university. She always is searching and longing for discovering new sciences that are related to her job and field and she does not afraid of failure and defeat.
As a result, for the reasons mentioned above and whole arrange of others, I strongly believe that it is far more expedient, struggle and in constant of peril to enhance their strong wish and more understand is an attribute of success people.
Consequently, it is highly recommended that, everyone can attain everything that they desire by working constantly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, really, so, well, for instance, as a matter of fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 31.0 13.8261648746 224% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 366.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9043715847 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87012331987 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562841530055 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.3704931094 48.9658058833 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.45110844103 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156349072966 0.236089414692 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407422243917 0.076458572812 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415212337795 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0753260417631 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575716278116 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 11.7677419355 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.