Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
The world has witnessed the unprecedented boom in all manner of fields in recent years. The flourish of the science, Internet and other high-technology industries has considerably intensified the need for qualified generations to be capable of shouldering the responsibility of integrating many ideas into bright inventions. It's indisputable that all the professionals must have received strict and comprehensive education. When it comes to instruction, teachers stand as the most significant role to rekindle the passion of students to learn and invigorate the students to master knowledge more efficiently and expeditiously so that they are equipped with practical skills to challenge every obstacle. From my standpoint, concomitantly teachers are more appreciated and respected in this fast-paced world for they can work wonders to cultivate new competent generations. The reasons are elaborated in the ensuing paragraphs.
First and foremost, we should bear in mind that the prerequisite for a country to attach importance to education is its comparative progressive social conditions. Never will a person take up a pen until he can subsist, the same is true of a country. In the past decades, nearly the whole world was entrapped in horrible wars or poverty, it's not a stretch to say that the subsistence must take precedence over education. Unequivocally at that era teachers could not enjoy as high reputations as today since the preoccupation of people at that time was to make money to support their families.
Furthermore, the proliferation of Internet enables teachers to amplify their scope of influence without the hassle of long distance brought. It was commonplace in the old time that the students must spend much time in transporting to consult a teacher, distance inevitably served as a stumbling block which had grossly precluded students from approaching their teachers. This kind of obstacles have utterly been tackled nowadays, however. In this brand new century, students are able to communicate with their teachers anytime without imposed constraints. Some newly invented and acclaimed app, which provide a platform for teachers to upload their videos to instruct lessons and lay out the questions asked by netizens, catch on the Internet. This trend can well exemplify the fact that teachers are empowered to diffuse their profound thoughts more broadly, so that the increase in their social status seems to be more reasonable.
Moreover, the flowers and praises teachers receive coincide with their untiring and indefatigable diligence. As the world is advancing towards further development, the requirements foisted on the teachers become stricter concurrently. My aunt can well illustrate that. As a teacher in high school, she is inured to prepare for the class until the midnight everyday in order to teach the children more concisely. Besides that, her school would send teachers to further study abroad periodically to equip them with edgy knowledge to edify the students. It is no wonder that they are valued more, considering they are so committed and devoted to their career nowadays.
Concerning all the statements mentioned above, I want to reiterate my standpoint that the rapidly increasing needs coupled with their endeavor finally help them to gain higher reputations and social status.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 337, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... entrapped in horrible wars or poverty, its not a stretch to say that the subsisten...
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Line 4, column 357, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...repare for the class until the midnight everyday in order to teach the children more con...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs coupled" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'coupling' or 'to be coupled'.
Suggestion: coupling; to be coupled
...point that the rapidly increasing needs coupled with their endeavor finally help them t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2814.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 518.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43243243243 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07308985841 2.67179642975 115% => OK
Unique words: 306.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.524837075471 113% => OK
syllable_count: 863.1 618.680645161 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7748453457 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.347826087 100.406767564 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5217391304 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1520882925 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409648782988 0.076458572812 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374943324063 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0793524222813 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387139700276 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 58.1214874552 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.1575268817 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 10.9000537634 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.01818996416 121% => OK
difficult_words: 164.0 86.8835125448 189% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 10.002688172 165% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.247311828 146% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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