Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of teachers work in society. If I were forced to choose, I would state that nowadays, the teacher are more appreciated and valued by society than they were before. Even though, some people believe that in the past teachers were more appreciated because they were so elite and scholar but in my firm belief in the contemporary time, teachers are more accoladed than they were before for three reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, I think nowadays every person have better understanding about the importance of the role of teacher in society. For instance, in these days all the parent know how hard is to deal with many children. They think that it is not easy to deal with number of children in the class and it is even more harder to attempt to learn them some sciences. For the things like this I believed that nowadays, society have better understanding over the difficulties that teachers face in daily bases with children in schools.
Secondly, in my firm opinion, some of the financial issue of the teachers is solved in current time and teachers are more paid than before and therefore, they have better financial position and can have a better prosperity. It is undeniable that in the case that teachers are not completely consent over their financial issues, the can not teach and more critically treat children in a proper ways. In the case of bad financial situation we can not expect that teacher have to do their job in the really well quality and level. It is clear to see why I think that better financial condition of the teachers in current time shows us that nowadays teachers are more appreciated and have a really great position in the community.
Finally, in my point of view, I think in the current age, teachers can use some other opportunities to improve their level of sophistication in the society. For example, nowadays, you can see that some of the teachers do some volunteer jobs just in order to have some positive effect on the people’s mind. Some teachers work some hours in some charities just to help the society and have a better role of improving that specific society. So I have to clarify my statement by positing that in the current age teachers have more chances to be appreciated and valued by all member of the society.
In the light of above mentioned reasons, I strongly believe that teachers are more accoladed and valued in the current age and I think that better financial situations, better understanding of every individual member of society and having more chances to be more valued and appreciated are some of the major reason that I use to support my point of view.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use only 'harder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: harder
...of children in the class and it is even more harder to attempt to learn them some sciences....
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...hools. Secondly, in my firm opinion, some of the financial issue of the teachers is solv...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'way'?
Suggestion: way
...e critically treat children in a proper ways. In the case of bad financial situation...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...For example, nowadays, you can see that some of the teachers do some volunteer jobs just in...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...s to be more valued and appreciated are some of the major reason that I use to support my p...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ted are some of the major reason that I use to support my point of view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 52.1666666667 146% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 479.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74530271399 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61003420243 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.400835073069 0.524837075471 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 735.3 618.680645161 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.1385307664 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.0625 100.406767564 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9375 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277961251913 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105786492966 0.076458572812 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805739050209 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172404373016 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702649382296 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 11.7677419355 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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