Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Teacher, as a job to teach the the knowledge to next generation, plays an important role in the development of the human for it becomes so difficult for children learn waht they need to know. Nowadays, there is always a statements saying that the teachers become less important and recieve less appreciation at present. However, i disagree with the opinion, and I think teacher is still crucial or even more significance.
First, the teacher becomes more and more valuable because it is harder for students to learn by themselves for the boom of the amout of knowledge. With the development of human technology and science, more and more nature rules are known and more and more theories are invented to explain the different phenomenan in our life. As a result, children need to learn more and more things to become a master of a subject and have the ability to explore the mystry of the word. if there is no teachers, it will become very difficult to accomlish this. While at past, there are just a little to be learnt for the students, they can teach themselves easily by reading the books or asking their parents.
Besides, teacher also becomes more appreciated in todays life. For the obviouly evidence, there are more and more univercity concentraing on cultivate teacher built nowadays. If there is no appreciate to become a teacher, no one would like to get into these kind of school and make the teacher as their future jobs. What is more the teacher palys an important role in society, they deserve a lot of respectation and appriciation. Meanwhile, the students nowadays are also admire their teacher for their wisdom and thier leading in students life. However, in the past, teacher did not have such important statue in the socialty, so there is no evidence that the teachers in the past were more appreciated.
Therefore, I think there is more aprreciation and significance today for the teachers because the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, i think, kind of, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.0286738351 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70603107684 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 212.727598566 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48632218845 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0939057704 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.866666667 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212446364448 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855625423692 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451019054372 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135847086472 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431752422377 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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