Doing which activity do you think can better help you strengthen the friendship between you and your friend?-having a good time together with your friend-solving your friend’s problem with him or her

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Doing which activity do you think can better help you strengthen the friendship between you and your friend?
-having a good time together with your friend
-solving your friend’s problem with him or her

Friends, whose company is always the source of an individual’s courage, is quite important in our lives. The debate over the best way to maintain friendship has been raging for a long time. From my perspective, although it is significant to have fun together sometimes, what matters more is to help each other address problems.

Firstly, helping friends in problem solving is the key to establishing trust and confidence between each other. People always tend to trust those who are willing to help them. If your friends are in trouble, imagine who will be appreciated most after you generously give your hand? Whether you address the problems effectively or not, the gratitude will deeply touch your friend, for they will know your reliability, that you will always have their back. What’s more, this will help form a confidence between you and your friends, which guarantees the positive future of your friendship.

Secondly, people who have been through one plight together will be emotionally closer to each other. Sharing the same experience which only belongs to the two of you, you and your friend will be able to understand each other better and eventually cherish one another more. Take me and my friend Suzie’s story as an example. Suzie was greatly helpful when I was going through an obstacle in my life. She came to my house everyday during my hard time, figuring out solutions with me together. With this precious memories in mind, me and Suzie have been best friends for over ten years, whether we can meet frequentily or not. Weathering a storm together can definitely enhance the emotional bond between friends.

Admitedly, having pleasant moments with friends is necessary in friendships. How the experience with friends feels can decide the feeling towards them. If I can only connect someone with painful memories, I am more prone to stay away from this person. On the contrary, if a person always reminds me of enjoyable old days, I will feel a stronger inclination to spend more time with him or her. However, the importance of having fun together still cannot outweigh the priority of solving problems together. People who only enjoy amusements together without deeper communication are what we called playmates, not friends.

In conclusion, the better way to strengthen friendships is to walk your friend through difficulties instead of barely entertainment. Although having fun with each other can improve the experience of relationships, trust bonded and the closeness founded by working challenges through together are the top priority in maintaining a friend.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 426, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...stacle in my life. She came to my house everyday during my hard time, figuring out solut...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, then, in conclusion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2192.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 423.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18203309693 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53508145475 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80501210884 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557919621749 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 649.8 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.4083124766 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3043478261 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3913043478 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08695652174 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428611328383 0.236089414692 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116683149922 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847848272994 0.0737576698707 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226115514854 0.150856017488 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976804484509 0.0645574589148 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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