Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Teachers are the fundamental of education. In the past, people usually respected and honored them as vital in the improving nations. however, the generation and environment changed, there are more different ways that we can absorb knowledge, such as, via the internet. In this regards, some people may think teachers are not important as before. generally speaking, I agree teacher has not their previous appreciation among people. there are a number of factors at play, as I shall discuss below.
One of these factors is teachers' salary. In past, teachers' salary was equal or even higher than the average income of other society members which supported them to maintain a good live condition. But now, as other jobs' income like engineers, doctors, and typical employees increase significantly, teachers' wage do not change so much. people usually judge and appreciate others based on their financial situation. Therefore, given that teaching has stood as a job with lower payment in the society, they are not valued as before.
Second, teachers' social position among people has weakened. In past, people respected teachers because they have more ability to access large amount of knowledge than other people. they considered teachers as individuals which were knowledgeable and worthy to respect. however, by the technology and the education programs, most of people can read and write, and they can get many information by the internet. In this regards, teachers' positions are not so unique.
The third factor is that children are not needed to send to school for education. Nowadays, there are more and more parents prefer to teach their kids by their own since they believe the educational system is not efficient and not feasible enough for each child. As, schools are not appreciated by parents, consequently, teachers are not honored by society as a member and employee of schools.
In sum, I think most of us not appreciate teachers as before depend on mentioned factors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, third, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 43.0788530466 51% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 321.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23676012461 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69505156854 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566978193146 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 618.680645161 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1102020462 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.05 100.406767564 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243605785666 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664412121572 0.076458572812 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431118250402 0.0737576698707 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128327159381 0.150856017488 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234184939227 0.0645574589148 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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